Taking
Pity by David Mark (Blue Rider Press, 2015, 336 pages,
$26.95.14.11) is the fourth entry in the Detective Seargeant McAvoy
series. It continues the ongoing struggle of the police in the and
around the old, degraded, and dreary industrial city of Hull in
Yorkshire. The protagonist, Detective Sergeant Aector McAvoy, is
recoveing from injuries suffered in the last volume, when he saved
his grievously injured wife's life from the vicious and shadowy
criminal enterprise known only as the Headhunters. McAvoy is a
hulking man, uncertain of his intelligence and haunted by an only
hinted at Scottish background that he allows to hinder him from
reaching his full potential. Nevertheless, his ambitious supervisor
Trish Pharoah misses him from active duty and reactivates him to
explore a fifty year old murder for which a man has been incarcerated all these years. In his investigations, supposed to be a simple
return to duty that re-established McAvoy's confidence and physical
health, McAvoy discovers connections to the Headhunters which
inevitably reintroduces him to much more active duty than either he
or Pharoah had anticipated.
Sadly, Mark seems to have
written himself into a plot corner that he cannot extricate himself from without tons of exposition. Dark, mostly unexplained (until the not
very exciting climax) characters corrupt the police and terrorize
other elements of the population while gaining shadowy control of the
drug trade in Hull. Ambitious upcoming officers and sleazy men and
women on the take or corrupted by their own appetites populate this
story with too many unsavory elements that it's difficult to find
someone, other than McAvoy, to admire. The extensive flashbacks made
necessary to solve serious plot problems make much of the book a
dreary search for sense. By the time I
reached the end, I didn't care any more. The secret of thrillers is
to make them thrilling, and of chillers to make them creepy. Neither
goal is successfully achieved in this dreary exercise.
David Mark
David Mark has been a
journalist for 15 years. He is the author of the DS Aector McAvoy
series. He lives in Yorkshire.
Taking
Pity by David Mark (Blue
Rider Press, 2015, 336 pages, $26.95.14.11) is the fourth entry in
the Detective Seargeant McAvoy series. It was supplied to me by the
publisher as an electronic galley through Edelweiss, and I read it on
my Kindle app.
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