David
A.
Poulsen
has written Last
Song Sung: A Cullen and Cobb Mystery
(Dundern, 2018, 352 pp., $17.99/5.38)
the third volume in a detective series set in Calgary, British
Columbia.
The lead characters, journalist Adam Cullen and private detective
Mike Cobb seek
to solve a fifty year old mystery set in the world of 1960’s folk
revival and political chaos.
Their back story involves the still unsolved murder of Cullen’s
wife Donna in a fire set by an arsonist. When the police cannot
identify the killer, Cullen hires Cobb, who also fails. Two
books later, the two have become partners in detecting and solving
crimes, with Cullen serving as researcher and co-investigator. He has
also gone on with his life, developing a relationship with Jill
Sawley and
her daughter Kyla, both of whom he loves and is deeply involved with.
In
Last
Song Sung,
the duo is hired by Monica
Brill
to discover the fate of her grandmother, Ellie Foster, a folksinger
who was abducted from The
Depression,
a coffee house in Calgary fifty years earlier during an incident in
which two of her fellow musicians were killed in an adjoining alley
as Ellie was forced into a car and driven away. Recently,
a CD has been mysteriously placed in Monica’s
car. On listening to it, she has become convinced it’s the voice of
her grandmother singing a previously unknown song containing elusive
language she thinks might prove to be clues to what happened to Ellie
and perhaps to help find her, if she’s still alive.
Meanwhile,
Cullen has been requested by Marlon Kennedy to take on a surveillance
task undertaken twenty-four years before when Faith Unruh was
brutally murdered. Kennedy has quit the police force to obsessively
video and maintain surveillance of the former Unruh home where he
believes the killer will one day return to the scene of the crime,
leading to his identification and capture or death. Kennedy must be
absent for a few days to tend to his dying ex-wife. Cullen, who
Kennedy had almost killed several years before thinking he might be
the killer, has been asked to camera-sit while Kennedy travels to his
ex-wife’s side.
A
third
plot line
is introduced that, at least at first, makes
no sense. The rescue mission where Cullen’s lover Jill works is in
financial distress, with their funding running out.
Cullen arranges to meet with the leader of a motorcyle gang called MF
to seek, for some unknown reason, a donation from them to the
mission. At the end of the meeting a threatening suggestion that if
they decide to donate might put Cullen, Jill, and even Kyla in
jeopardy is introduced, but never fully developed. The connections
between the three plot lines are tenuous at best.
I
found this book to be ploddingly slow, without much happening as
Cullen and Cobb pursue their slender clues eventually leading deep
into the Canadian coffee house scene of the 1960’s and the
political radicalism of that era. Eventually they travel to to
Canada’s capitol Ottawa
for the resolution. The
dialogue is plodding at best, barely substituting for more extensive
description, which would have been worse. The action sequences are
few, far between and unconvincing. There’s never a moment in the
novel where the action is heart stopping or the dialogue snappy and
lively. Poulsen’s
insertion after the climax of a cliff hanger designed to get me to
read the next volume is transparent, while taking away from a
potential for a more immediate and interesting ending to the current
volume. The end is more than unsatisfying without succeeding in being
seductive.
David A. Poulsen
David
A. Poulsen
has been a teacher, actor, cowboy, high school football coach and,
most of all, a writer. He is the author of more than twenty-five
books, including YA titles and the current novel, the third outing of
Cullen & Cobb. According to his online profile, he is also a
noted rodeo competitor, announcer, and former rodeo clown, with over
1500 performances to his credit.
Last
Song Sung: A Cullen and Cobb Mystery
(Dundern, 2018, 352 pp., $17.99/5.38)
by
David A. Poulsen leaves
too many balls in the air without raising the heat enough to make any
of them really interesting, breathtaking, or satisfying. Set
in a period still of interest to people because of the folk music era
it tries to evoke and the time of political disruption not unfamiliar
to us today, this should be an intriguing and involving story. Sadly,
it falls way short of the mark. The plot is plodding, the dialogue
lacking spark, and finally, through the device of a nakedly obvious
concluding cliff hanger, dishonest. I received the book as a
pre-publication electronic galley from the publisher through
Edelwiess. I read it on my Kindle.
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